Review #1:
Candy Pop In Love
R18: Yes
Pairing: Masaya x IchigoSummer vacation is almost here, and Ichigo is concerned about getting a red mark on on her test, therefore having to take a make-up exam.
So, she asks Aoyama-kun if he can help her out, and he invites her to a study session at his house.
The problem is, since it's
Aoyama-kun, and they're at
his house, she's having a tough time actually concentrating.
And *here* is where our story begins.
"I can't study here!"She had expected to be nervous, but not this nervous... though hasn't she been at Masaya's house before? In volume 3, I think... And she was in a much worse situation then. A simple study session should be nothing, right?
However, this is a doujinshi. Anything is possible.
Anything.Getting back to the story, Ichigo then thinks, "I'm so happy, that my ears and tail might appear..." So guess what happens next?
"Your ears and tail came out... didn't you notice?"So if Masaya knows that she's a Mew Mew, that means this doujin takes place after volume 5. But that means she was already a cat then... Huh.
After this incident, they decide to take a break. Uh-oh.
They get some drinks (which Masaya probably drugged, knowing the outcome of this story), and Masaya admits that he's "always" nervous, too. Ichigo's a bit surprised by this, as shown by her
really cute face expression.
"You haven't noticed?"
"Ah... not at all."Masaya then says that if he had the animal DNA, too, he's certain his ears and tail would be out. Also, he's glad Ichigo's a Mew Mew, because he can easily tell what she's feeling.
And then... He gets that "rap tiem" look in his eyes.
"I may not have a cat's ears and tail, but there's a way I can communicate my feelings to you.""Feelings", huh.
Unfortunately, since Ichigo's mind isn't nearly as dirty as mine is, she has no clue how he can do this.
Then, the mood quickly changes from "D'aww, cute"...
"I wonder how..."To "Ohshi-- rap tiem".
"Slowly, I'm longing to know..."Yeah, you'll "know", all right.
Now, who wants to see some disturbing face contortions? (You probably shouldn't look if your parents or siblings are in the room.)
Nice abs, Masaya.
Yes, that is a censor bar. Yes, I put it there. Those nipples are really scary.
And... cut.
Because the last face contortion looked like she was about to puke or something.
Then Ichigo falls asleep. She's reminding me of Ebony here. ....or was it Enoby?
Masaya returns! Yes, we only see his face once in the whole lemon scene, and it wasn't even a very important panel, either (then again, were any of them important?). Just as I'd feared, unfortunately. D: He turned into Faceless Hentai Guy, didn't he?
(Relation to Noseless River Guy?)
And another attempt at fluff. It's pretty cute, as long as you disregard the fact that
Ichigo is now pregnant.Oh, I forgot. Pregnancy doesn't exist in doujinshi land!
"I want to be... with Aoyama-kun forever..."And then it's over.
Well, what was the point of that?
Anyway. The art was pretty good. The art in the non-hentai scenes, anyway... The pr0n was totally ruined by Ichigo's "BLAAAARRRGGH" faces and mutated nipples. Ichigo, UR DOIN IT RONG.
(I think.)
The plot. Well, the plot was... Nonexistent. There wasn't even a "morning after" follow-up. Unless you count the last panel.
So! Ichigo somehow passed the exam, even though they
apparently didn't get much studying done. Yay, a plot device!
However...
Lololololol
Also, the other Mew Mews are nowhere to be found.
Until next time,
~Fushi